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- L.D. Alford
- Author of The Second Mission
- www.lionelalford.com
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- 18 written, 6 published, 1 on contract
- The Second Mission – historical fiction
- Centurion – historical fiction
- Aegypt – historical fiction/suspense
- The End of Honor - SiFi
- The Fox’s Honor - SiFi
- A Season of Honor - SiFi
- The Goddess of Light – on contract
- The Goddess of Darkness – in consideration
- The Ghost Ship Chronicles – in consideration
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- Historical fiction novel with a SiFi driver
- Idea 1994, start 1996, finished 1994
- Published by Xulon in Aug 2003
- Follows Alan Fisher and Sophia
- Time: October 400 BC to October 399
BC
- Location: Athens Greece
- Available here from me and
Watermark Books
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- 1. Novel, characters, history, politics
- 2. Ancient Greece in time and place – 400 BC
- 3. Paganism and the musterium – 400 BC
- 4. Greek life – 400 BC
- 5. Socrates
- 6. The Socratic Dialogs
- 7. The Death of Socrates
- 8. Conclusion
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- When I write a book, I always ask a question
- The question that propelled The Second Mission is: What would happen if a modern person
was accidentally pulled back into a time mission?
- You can see there are cascading effects that result from this question
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- Time stopped. For a single drawn-out heartbeat, nothing moved, and in
the whole world there was no sound. Like thin paint running out of an
open bucket, all the color drained from the earth. Only a black and
white landscape and the silence remained. Then, all at once, the world
vibrated, exploded, screamed, blazed—and turned upside down.
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- Clouds sifted slowly in the powder-blue sky. The clouds touched the
mountains and frosted them with a fine white covering of snow. Trees:
pine and laurel and European oak marched like towering gods up the rocky
slopes. They formed tongues of verdant fire filled with chirping
songbirds. The world swam. It gave a solid lurch, and with a sickening
thud, Alan came to rest amid the trees. He lay sick and dazed for a
moment. Then, unconsciously, he reached up and grabbed his head. The
movement nauseated him, and pain shot through his skull. For a while, he
couldn’t think clearly. He lay still again, and allowed his mind a
chance to catch up with his whirling thoughts.
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- Novel is historical—2+ years of research
- Mainly primary sources in history
- Language, religion, and cultural details
- Suspense driven by historical data
- My question: What would happen if
a modern person was accidentally pulled back into a time mission? Cascading questions:
- What is the most important event in history that future societies would
want to confirm or observe?
- How would they go about it?
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- “What do you mean no one will be traveling for at least a year? Aren’t
you going back?”
- Sophia’s face took on a guarded expression.
- “You will take me back?” he said forcefully.
- “I... I can’t.”
- “What do you mean, you can’t?”
- “Please, please keep your voice down,” Sophia appeared close to tears,
“A man isn’t supposed to be in this house.”
- “All right, I’m lowering my voice. What do you mean, you can’t?”
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- She spoke in a rush, “We prepared for this mission for ten years. It’s
mission number two. I trained for that entire time. I was handpicked for
this mission. The groundwork was put together, the location prepared. No
contact has been made with these people. We worked ten years to put this
mission together, and I am here for one year,” Sophia’s voice died away
to a whisper.
- “What did you say?”
- She spoke a little louder, “This is a one-year trip. I cannot return
until this time, one year from today. No one can return for one year,”
she put her hands over her eyes and tears dropped between her fingers.
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- “If you expected this, then why are you crying?”
- She put down her hands. Tears streaked her face. Sophia stared at him
with incredulity, “This is the mission, my mission. You have no part to
play in this. You are a dependent, forced upon me. None of my training
took anything like this into account.” She crossed her arms, “If you
don’t believe me, if you don’t trust me and obey me, you and I will
likely die here. I will have failed completely. Ten years of planning
and training will go for nothing.”
- “What’s the danger? Why are you so afraid?”
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- “This is not the modern world, Mr. Fisher. This is a dangerous time.
There is little rule of law. In this time, might largely determines
right. Because of that, people are more suspicious and dangerous than
you can imagine. People here rarely travel from their own city-state.
They kill strangers indiscriminately. If you cannot speak the language,
and if you do not know their customs, they will likely kill you
outright. If we infringe law or custom, we could both be put to death. I
am already suspect because I supposedly returned from another city.”
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- A time travel mission (the second one) to Oct 400 BC for one year –
until the death of Socrates in Oct 399 BC
- I wanted to show Greek society and culture
- I wanted to make the dialogs of Socrates available to everyone
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- Caliban wasn’t listening to her. His mind was still wrapped around the
revelation of the truth of his situation. He spoke around a bite of the
dry bread, “The mission depends on this money. Everything you have done
today supports the mission. Just what exactly is this mission?”
- Her eyes got large and she smiled, “The mission is to validate the words
of Socrates and to observe his death.”
- “This is the most critical question to answer in history?”
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- “No,” she said with gravity, “this is the second most important
question.”
- “I didn’t really mean to sound sarcastic. Why this question?”
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- Only her lips were visible in the firelight, “Socrates is the beginning
point for philosophy in Western civilization. We base the validity of
science, literature, and philosophy on his methods and ideas. He was the
first person we know in history who was martyred for his ideas. His
death foretold and began the decline of the Greek city-state. If we
understand the truth of Socrates’ ideas, we define Western civilization.
If we validate Plato’s records of Socrates’ dialogues, we validate
ancient Western literature.”
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- Prior to the Age of Reason
- Historical-Legal method assumed to prove veracity of documents in
antiquity
- Age of Reason (circa. 1600 to 1700)
- All knowledge could be gained by reason alone <or> All knowledge
has to come through the senses
- Application of scientific method and reason to many fields where they
had not before
- Philosophical and political movement in thought
- Rationalism and empiricism were rallying calls
- Assumed by many to simply be early enlightenment
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- Roger Chartier - "This movement [from the intellectual to the
cultural/social] implies casting doubt on two ideas: first, that
practices can be deduced from the discourses that authorize or justify
them; second, that it is possible to translate the terms of an explicit
ideology the latent meaning of social mechanisms.”
- First: questioning of information passed down as authoritative
- Second: questioning if the information passed down should be used to
govern social and cultural mores
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- Prior to the Age of Enlightenment
- Historical-Legal method assumed to prove veracity of documents in
antiquity
- Age of Enlightenment (circa. 1700 to 1800)
- Invention of the Novel
- Extended intentionally fictional narrative that appears to be truth
- Many in the East: The Tale of Genji by Murasaki Shikibu (11th
century)
- Revolution in the West
- Robinson Crusoe by Daniel Defoe (1719)
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- Implicit assumption that everything passed down and that passed
Historical-Legal tests was truth
- Question AoE wanted to answer
- What was fiction and what not fiction
- Novel brought this to the forefront
- Ascent of science – scientific method
- Ascent of of archeology – nascent science
- What was reason - logic
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- The great question from antiquity is…
- Are ancient dialogs the actual words of the speakers or are they polite
fictions used to propel a philosophical proof or narrative
- Answer has incredible historical ramifications
- If actual words—historical documents represent the actual vocabulary
and thoughts from the past
- If polite fictions or something in between—literary documents with
historical ramifications, but not historical truth
- Answer radically affects knowledge and view of history
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- Literally, the second most important question in history
- Answer affects our entire view of the past
- Therefore: The Second Mission
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- The postulate of the Novel
- Second mission in time is to determine if the Socratic dialogs recorded
by Plato were the actual words of Socrates or fictions by Plato
- Main character Alan Fisher is accidentally drawn into the mission
- Allows me to show the reader Greek times and events from the viewpoint
of a modern man
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- Obvious question…
- What was the first mission?
- Answered in the book
- I’ll make you wait a while before I answer
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- In the gray morning light, the room looked bleaker and less protective
than it had in the close firelight of the night before. Caliban reached
for a fresh piece of firewood and with it began to gently prod the
coals. Behind him, he heard the curtain move, and Sophia abruptly
cautioned him, “Be careful! Don’t put out the coals.”
- She crossed the short distance in a rush and went down on one knee
before the hearth. In Greek, she spoke a singsong prayer and sprinkled
ashes across the stones. She formed a symbol, the Greek letter “A”, on
the hearth, then with a gentle sweep; she cleared the old ash onto a
cloth.
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- Sophia took the piece of fresh wood from Caliban and gently pushed it
into the pile of ash and coals she banked the night before. She gently
blew on the wood and fanned a quick flame that she fed slowly and
carefully, “You must learn to do this exactly as I have. The fire cannot
go out.”
- “Why not? Can’t you just start it again yourself?”
- “To light a home’s hearth fire from anything except a fire lit from the
temple flame would be a sacrilege.”
- “To them but not to us.”
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- She pounced on his words, “You still don’t understand. We are ‘them.’
You must begin to think like they do, or you will have no hope of
survival. You must begin to think like a person from this time and
culture. Your actions must become as automatic as breathing. If you take
shortcuts in one thing, those shortcuts will be evident in everything.
You cannot gradually become. You cannot almost be. You must be a man of
this time and culture. You must immerse yourself, and your mind must be
dedicated to this goal alone. Both our lives depend on your success.”
- Caliban mumbled something unintelligible, then he said, “I’ll try.”
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- “Very good,” Sophia replied. The fire already burned, a clean small
blaze. “During the night, I thought about your new identity, and I’ve
just about finalized my ideas.” Sophia turned to face him, “First of
all, you will be a mute, but you are not quite deaf. You may feign that
you can hear a bit but not a lot. You cannot speak. Your infirmity will
be part lack of wits and part deafness. If you keep this in mind, you
will be able to realize some gain from the appearance of stupidity
combined with hearing loss. Because you are a slave, most Greeks will
think your lack of speech, and perhaps your
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- deafness, is a duplicity. This will protect you if you make a mistake.
But, it is imperative that at all cost, you keep up your act; Greeks are
intrigued with good acting and with some duplicity, but they never want
to be reminded they have been fooled or lied to. You will be safe so
long as they are not sure if your muteness is really an act. If you
forget your character for one moment, that may be your last.”
- “I understand.”
- “Caliban, you come from the mountains to the north. As a youth, you were
captured while fighting during the Peloponnesian War in the battle of
Amphipolis. You have been a slave ever since.
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- “In the fighting, you were struck on the head and left for dead. From
that moment, you have been unable to speak or hear well. Your original
master was Dyisthenes of Piraievs. He sold you to me. You did not live
in my son’s house.”
- “What if someone knows my old master Dyisthenes?”
- “That won’t matter. He died last year. He owned many slaves—most of them
captured during war. This is all the past you need. If anyone is curious
about your sudden appearance, I will say that you were waiting in
Piraievs to bring my share of some trading profits. That will also help
explain our retrieval today,” she said the last almost to herself.
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- Alan becomes a slave to Sophia
- He is to act mute
- Allows him latitude that freemen did not have
- She loans him to Socrates to act as his slave
- Allows direct interaction that Sophia could not have on her own
- She has special tools that allow the recording of everything that is
happening
- Alan carries these recording devices
- That’s the story driver!
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- What this allows us is a human eye view of the five Socratic dialogs
that took place in the last year of Socrates’ life:
- Euthyphro
- Cratylus
- Crito
- Phaedo
- The Apology of Socrates
- The Second Mission includes retranslations of these works
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- We will look at the dialogs a little
- In The Second Mission they are
- Placed in context in history
- Retranslated into modern English
- Turned into conversations
- Made as understandable as possible
- Terms and ideas placed into a more coherent context – they are
explained within the text
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- Likewise, we see the Greeks as they lived in 400 BC
- Inside their homes
- Their entertainment
- Pastimes
- Symposia
- Cooking
- The Market
- The Lyceum
- The Agora
- We get to see into their minds and culture
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- The great question from antiquity is…
- Are ancient dialogs the actual words of the speakers or are they polite
fictions used to propel a philosophical proof or narrative
- Main character Alan Fisher is accidentally drawn into the second mission
into time
- Through this we will see Greek times and events from the viewpoint of a
modern man and the death and five dialogs of Socrates
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- 2. Ancient Greece in time and place – 400 BC
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